My heart blooms for you
Like a rose sunkissed by Spring's
Afternoon sunlight
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A contest entry
- GIVE ME YOUR BEST by Mila7.
600 points, ended March 24, 60 entries
Gold trophy winner
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What did you think?
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I'm not a big fan of haiku's but this one is good. I like the theme and the word choice is great. Good job and good luck! ~Des
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lovely take
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I love the fact you've remained anonymous.
So here is my furthered explanation:
The word I loved was sunkissed, it made your poem so personal and at the same time so original and unconventional.
The phrase I loved was springs afternoon sunlight:
I could hear the birds chirping as the sun set and smell the flowers which dispelled their fragrance. By one small visual imagery you've managed to convey much more.
The truth of a blooming heart- great write
Mila
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beautiful...
you've managed to encompass the feeling with the warmth of the imagery.
i loved it. -
Thanx 4 entering. Good luck! - cgirl0410
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oo i like this, most haiku's i never understand
but i do this one 
Great job 
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Forgot to applaud! Sorry!
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Oh, this is a great Haiku.
I find that they're so difficult to write b/c your so restricted, but this peice is beautifuly done.
So perfect this time of year to, 5 more days till spring is officialy here!
(congrats on getting tagged on animal lover's group)
xoxo,
--Gooshawn
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Absolutely delightful poem.
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its spring and I could smell the new buds blooming and fresh air caressing it. lovely. thank you for sharing.
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This made me want Spring to come even sooner. A lovely haiku.
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lovely
you say it well
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