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Swing Batter, Swing!

If you step to the plate consumed by your doubt,
or you don’t even try for fear you’ll strikeout;
You’ll never discover the one thing you need,
you must learn to fail before you succeed.

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Kevin Pace, wordsdomatter

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  • Ken-Maverick
    February 22

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    JUDGED!!

    You've managed to get your message across wonderfully in just four lines, well done!
    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken


  • Robin Candor
    February 14

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    Kevin, you are the master of short verse that has a meaning. You can develope an idea into a few lines that make such a statement about life or spirituality. just the basic things that make life larger or smaller. I applaud your mind and your thinking in almost all of your writes. The time I have spent at your corner of writes has never been a disappointment. This is no exception. RC


    • WordsDoMatter
      February 21
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      thanks

      you are welcome in my corner anytime... but, remember:
      Sometimes we get stuck in the corner we’ve found,
      when something might change if we just turned around.
      Oh... there I go again... sorry, can't help it! lol - Kevin


  • DesolatELifE
    February 14

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    I bought a lottery ticket on Wednesday. I did not win. The reason I bought another one today is that I accepted that failure. Had I not accepted the failure, I probably wouldn't have bought another ticket, and would nave no chance of succeeding.


  • Naznomarn
    February 14
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    Short and sweet. Very true!

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