If you were an orchard i'd grow apple trees
If you were an ocean i'd sail all the seas
If you were a sunset id move to the west
If you were to ask i'd pass every test
All of theses things i'd do through out time
If you make a promise to always be mine
A contest entry
- "I KNEW I LOVED YOU BEFORE I MET YOU" by rinzurajan.
900 points, ended April 11, 29 entries
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Comments
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I liked this, well done.
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I wonder if this could be extended and have a more concrete feeling to the poem.
I like it for what it was. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck in the other you have entered.
-deadly -
simple and beautiful...
but i feel it doesn't fit the prompt...
anyways good luck
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