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comfortable.



you make me
feel so comfortable in my skin,
and my laugh in the longest time
lingers long after the punch line
because it just does;

you know, it’s automatic
and catchy and spontaneous and magic
and a thousand sweetest things

you make me
me, and the rest of the world in a smile.



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  • dx d by me
    February 19

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    Love the opening for this piece:
    " you make me
    feel so comfortable in my skin"

    that is a lovely sentiment, in and of itself, however, the fact that you have someione that allows you to be genuine, is a grace, that allows you to live well. Nice write! Geo


  • Beauty Of Silence
    February 15

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    i got lost in your second stanza. (just letting you know, incase this comment is utterly rubbish and totally doesnt suit your poem)

    but i got your last stanza. it was so sweet and lovely and i know its an amazing feeling to have someone who can make you feel on top of the world. aparently you've found that someone. well, hope u guys get married and live happily ever after (a bit too far?)

    oooh oooh and the line "because it just does" see, i neer thought it could fit into any poem coz it just didnt really sound poetic enough but heck, u put it into this poem perfectly and made it poetic. any way of making ME poetic? (just wondering)