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you were my palette



streaking across my palm
scripting punctuations across your smile
while evenings wasted between our
corny jokes and halfway smiles

that was my life
captured in one-second freeze frame

if I could, I would have
drawn a portrait of that zillion-watt smile
as you talked about stars and wishes and
a-thousand-other-things

and while lamplights
danced across your face, while the rest of
the world was a blackout

I kinda thought it was poetic,
and went crazy in your brilliant eyes.


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  • Walk-Free
    February 15

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    brilliant.

    thanks for taking the time to do this! i love this too much


  • Kia Tenshi
    February 14
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    Aw...it's so wonderful!!!