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Ecstasy

Why are you so elusive,
To my furious, ferocious affection?
Why aren't you more conducive,
To a love craving detection?

With every single passing day,
I long for you that much more.
With every single gaze my way,
Yours is the only one I adore.

How much longer will I wait,
To out your secret admirer.
How I wish it's not too late,
For me - your heart's desirer.

I'm just a poor and loving man,
With little to call my own.
Leaving home when I can,
Meant spending years alone.

So don't mistake my crush,
As instability and insanity.
I'm compelled to this colossal rush,
To assert that I love you carelessly.

How your wispy locks caress,
Your exquisite, elegant look.
How your silky skin does address,
My attention, wanton, you took.

Oh for your rosy, ruby pout,
I fall at your feet for thee.
I'm a bedazzled, bewildered lout,
You're my ecstasy.

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  • Everlasting Ellen
    February 20
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  • Everlasting Ellen
    February 20

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    Aw that is sweet as can be Damoon Its beautiful, I love the first stanza its so deep. I hope you will find your love, and that she will accept it.