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Why?

Broken, cold & swept away
Just like a homeless on a snowy day
I can't believe I trusted you
I fell for that fake smile
That glitter in your eyes
You forgot all the promises
You left me dead
After all what you said
What have I done to you
To torture me everyday?
Couldn't you just simply
Tell me to go away?
Why? I ask you on my knees
Why do you have to agonize me,
When you is all what my heart sees?






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  • jpebbles39
    May 30
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    I found this to show so much emotion...this a very good read...


  • khalakhelo
    February 26
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    Mak u made me cry!!! who is this stupid one that could do that 4 u...man u r so lovable!


  • Anonymous Spark
    February 15
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    This poem is so sad
    i love it