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To my Valentines

I don't know where to start.  
I don't know what to say.
Should i tell you of the feelings in my heart
but so many have described love that way.

Should i say love is a flower
or a warm summers day,
how you are with me every hour,
or is that to cliche' a thing to say 

I love You, every part and every day.
every flaw and in every way. 

A small poem can not contain, 
a feeling so amazing.
Nor can a  poem so plain
show you in mere phrasing,

the whole of what i feel
whole of what is real.

To my one and only

I love You

 

 

 

 

 

happy valentines my love

 

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happy valentines i know its not very good but i hope you enjoy it my love
you will always be in my heart

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  • EEE!!!

    awww i loved it carre ^^ tis.....adorable XD

    hugs n kisses 4 u

    cli
    xxx

  • Poco Loco
    February 19

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    Beautiful write that says all it was meant to. I loved the approach you took on looking at the love cliche's but how they werent enough. A fantastic write. Well done! xxx


  • kelbornro
    February 14
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    awwwwwww

    its beautiful carre, it says alot and thankyou. i love you to my love.