Flowing hair that glimmers
Accented by blinding white light
Her gentle wings unfold and hide her
Against the velvet night
A crescent moon is her bed
A sheet of black her blanket
And as she strokes the earth to sleep
She sings to her star and wakes it
A blue radiance touches her skin
While her moonlit aura glows
And a glare that would stop the earth from spinning
And whisper to you as it slows
I would be her if I were to choose
For she speaks of grace and embodies a mystery
A beauty of secrets, an angel of night
Forever my life – it feels my destiny
Author notes
#9
A contest entry
- Which Looks Like You? by Amythest Moonjade.
400 points, ended February 23, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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aw, this is so beautiful, a wonderful poem you have written her and congrats on the trophy, keep writing.
Stephanie ♥
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Brilliant
love the rhythm and creativity of this one. Very nicely done and line ten should be while. Beautiful write Amy.
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Merry meet,
Thank you for your beautiful entry. The power and wistfulness that you embue the lines in this work belie your age. Wonderful, I didn't even noticed that it rhymed until my third time through. Very well done.
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This is brilliant, it creates such powerful images. Your writing is so pure and heartfelt. I love this.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing,
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WOW!! AMY U F*CKING FREAK!! wow!! omg!!
how in the hell is this GAY!! this is AMAZING!! absolute ly STUNNING imagery.. your rhyme is fantastic!! :D
we seemed to have swapped 2day :P
ur amazing dude.. keep it up u noob! :D
this is ur best poem. but they are all so dam gud!
xx
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