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Wake up Call

Steamy breath,
caresses lips.

savoring moment;
eyes closed
my body comes
alive

I hold tighter,
take another sip...

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prompt:
strong coffee 18 words
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  • penman gold member
    February 14
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. Great choice of 18 words.

  • Michael P gold member
    February 14
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    Yes, I knew exactly what this was without a prompt-strong coffee, gotta savor it-peace


  • ZachP gold member
    February 14

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    oooooh . . . lovely.

    I don't need a coffee so much today, as a tea
    a nice, steaming peppermint tea sounds lovely :-)

    But java has it's time & place, too.