Let me hold your hand just..
What I am going to depict you came to be called Love, in pink.
Let me look into your eyes to see the lust..
Come with me in a world we built in infatuation..
What we are going to feel in there came to be called Love, in pink.
I am absorbed into your delicate beauty, enfolding always my heart into strong passion..
Escape away with me into that blissful world..
What we are going to live together came to be called Love, in pink.
Let’s go, talk, and let us connect our souls on a mountaintop to be master of the world..
I can’t promise I will heal you..
What I am going to do with you came to be called Love, in pink.
Let my tongue talk into your mouth my “daragaya” for, I love you..
I whisper your name into the night..
What we made into the warmth of each came to be called Love, in pink.
The memories we shaped with sweat, saliva and other fluids now make our lives bright..
Je t’aime mon amour.
BBB
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A very pretty write..
Good work poet and thank you for this entry. I did enjoy reading it and I can see it took some cautious thought to stay on theme. You did well.
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P: have a pleasurable feel about that makes those who dont want love crave it.
my only suggestion is to explain in author notes why it has to do so much with pink it confuses me quite a bit
thanks for entering -
This a lovely Hans, it's so soft and loving.
You do have a way with blunt yet still sexy nature.
I know I am not your love in life, yet this made me
smile and think of loving things.
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