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the Wood Wolf

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Once there was a little girl called Mona
She went to visit her grandma in the wood
Where lived a wolf that liked to dance and sing
I guess like any good wood wolf would

Now don't go stumbling on my words my friends
For Mona needs you to get her by
If you should stumble and fall ,well that just wouldn't do
Cause wood wolves would grab her passing by

And what would the wood wolf do with her you ask
As you wonder and at me you puzzled glance
Well he'd do what wood wolves would always do
Sing to her and ask the girl to dance


        14.2.2009

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I know! I was in a silly mood when I wrote this.

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  • individuality gold member
    August 14

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    ah good fun piece, so the wood wolf wiggles with wily musical masterpeices and sings songs, slowly, sometimes quirkily quickly so mona may miraculously move while wood wolf grooves


    • condor gold member
      August 14
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      Thanks, mate. I reckon all animals have a sense of humor and sometimes it just needs to be shown. Appreciate you reading.


  • Legend silver member
    May 25

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    I am completely into silly, wacky and just plain crazy poetry So this one suited me down to the ground..More poets should lose the serious side and just let the pen do as it wishes.
    Great little bit of nonsense i love it

  • ea silver member
    April 12
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    This gave me a chuckle.

  • Rudy Ignatius
    February 18

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    Some of my favorite poetry is silly poetry, which is why I am a huge fan of many children poets, Kenn Nesbitt especially. I learned a long, long time ago that poetry needn't be entirely serious to be picked apart my intellectual minds.

    I loved this one!

    Brit

    • condor gold member
      February 20
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      Thank you mate for your wonderful comments. Occasionaly, I like to be a bit dippy! I think if the moment is there and the piece shows itself, then there is something to be said for it.


  • Chunky Monkee
    February 17

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    awww, sometimes silly brings out the best in us simply put...ADORABLE! ~Marla~


    • condor gold member
      February 20
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      Thanks, Marla. I hate to be serious all the time. Don't even watch the news if I can help it. Too depressing.

  • awwww i love it well done my friend


  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 14

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    This is cute hon! I like this from you Keeping penning


    • condor gold member
      February 14
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      Thanks, mate. Just a silly mood I got into. Go figure! lol!!!!!!!


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    February 14

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    Excellent We all need to be silly every now and then and I think this is certainly a gem


    • condor gold member
      February 14
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      Thanks, mate. Had to be silly today. Needed to be with all that has been going on.


  • Ann45 gold member
    February 14
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    Brilliant Huni, left me wanting to read to the end, very well versed my dear.. *hugs*

    • condor gold member
      February 14
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      Thanks for the read. It is a bit silly this one but when things come to you, you just have to put them down. A wood wolf would! LOL!!!!!!!!


  • rbruce gold member
    February 14
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    I Like it. One does not have to be serious all the time. Reminds me of Esaw Wood from years ago.

    • condor gold member
      February 14
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      Thanks, Bob. Sometimes, I just get in these silly moods and things like this come out. Must be the smoke from this morning. lol!!!!!!!

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