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~ Your Valentine


I may not have grand words to share
But to tell you how I feel, I will try
I'll let my heart pour out, I accept the dare
Even if it takes me another life to die

In my dreams you'll always be my love
It makes me so proud to call you mine
As the blessed rain falls from the doors above
My darling, I would be your valentine..

As we spend each day loving deep
I feel your presence right beside me each day
You are my comfort as every night I go to sleep
Your words lifting me up, over he skies and away..

You are the hope that is seen in my brown eyes
The uplifting spirit, that keeps me going through days
For our love is pure, there are no tears and lies
I promise I'll be yours for ever and for always..

~ * ~

Author notes

For my AP hubby Tim
Thanks for being there always

Love,
Lonely

Happy Valentines Day to all

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  • Quabben
    February 26
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    Very Good

    You make a Valentine very special.

  • Lovely words,


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 20

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    Beautiful Sentiments...

    Thank you for your wonderful Valentine's Day entry in my contest!! I'm wishing you all the best!! Peace, xx Cyn


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 19
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    I had to come back and read this beauty, thanks for making my heart fill loved from your lovely soul of tenderness.

  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 14

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    Beautiful!!!!!!

    Wow, how touching this is to read my darling dear, and how when I read it with my eyes, I feel in flow your words down deep in my soul. You make me whole, and I am also pleased that you share your heart with me, and love me tenderly. I'm really happy right now for some reason! Thanks for making me smile, my day has been not up to par until I read your sweet soul on this once lonely night, now I feel you right by my side. -sighs- Much love Wifey, and keep up the wonderful words you weave that inspire me! Peace, Timothy xo

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