My dear, I have a confession.
But before I begin, I must ask
That you excuse me for being brash;
My mind is exploding tonight,
And I will hold nothing back.
You freed my heart, you did.
And when you sent me soaring
I saw the world with renewed insight;
A perspective I never thought possible.
Through eyes wiped clear of disdain.
The things you do to me...
Oh how I wish I could explain.
The pure ecstasy of your presence
Leaves my knees weak and trembling;
My lungs, breathless.
With every touch and every glance,
Every kiss and every dream,
You drag me deeper and deeper
Into the warmth of your energy.
Your flame sends chills down my spine.
I ought to admit, however,
That I am sinking fast
And have become perilously helpless.
Your riptide has sucked me under, my love.
And I am thankful that I can't swim.
Author notes
i love you, nikki <3
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Comments
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punk this poem blow my mind at just how much you love this girl, keep it up and never let go of the love you have for her. I love you Big Brother, keep up the good work
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This poem is exactly what you promise . . . a simple love poem, but all the more beautiful because it is so. Amazingly tender, beyond all belief. I hope your beloved is moved to read this, as I was.
Z~
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