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Strawberries, Champagne, and Candle Light

 

 

 

 

 

Spend the rest of the evening with me

Tell me your deepest thoughts and desires

Reach out, take my hand, and trust in me

All of your problems, worries, and fears 

Will be gone as I hold you in my loving arms

Breaking down every wall of doubt and fear that you have built

Enter my realm of passion and sweet seduction as I remove your

Red laced panties and dive deep into you

Rest assured that you are safe in my arms for my

Intentions are only to bring you to a state of euphoria

Each hour that passes I am going to show you the meaning of

Sexuality, passion, and romance at its very best

 

Caressing you in my arms as I lift up your blouse

Holding and suckling your voluptuous breasts

As you moan and pull lightly on my hair

Meeting me with every thrust you look deep into my eyes

Pleading for me to continue as I tease and pull out of you

Always so intoxicating is the scent of your long brown hair

Growing impatient you slap my ass and force me back into you

Needing more I throw your body onto the bed and

Enter you once again as I watch your eyes roll in the back of your head

 

Alluring and so beautiful is your body from head to toe

Never have I felt more in love than I do today

Dropping to my knees I taste your oozing mound as you start to

 

Cum inside of my mouth, I stick my two fingers inside of you

Adding to your pleasure I run my tongue down to your

Nice ass and then work my way back up to your pussy

Dripping with lust and passion you get up and push me down

Letting me relax as you take hold of my aching cock and swallow

Every inch of it while massaging my balls

 

Leaving me lost in a world of erotic bliss

I feel my cock start to throb as it hits the back of your throat, you

Give my balls a hard squeeze and I start to cum in your mouth

Holding me in place you slowly start to suck and swallow every ounce

Taking me over the edge as I wish you a Happy Valentine's Day

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Erotic Acrostic Poem
Prompt: http://th06.deviantart.com/images3/300W/i/2004/154/6/0/Taste.jpg

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Comments

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  • wow gotta say this is definitely erotic. I love the picture and the writing goes right along with it. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.

  • Definately.
    This reminds me of when Stuey and I first started. Talking about life and then... Well, the love making began and we just couldn't stop ourselves.


  • geckogirl silver member
    March 15

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    WOW... An erotic acrostic totally amazing... no wonder you won gold for this piece in your last contest... written with a gold pen indeed


  • Emmyb gold member
    March 14

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    crikey

    crikey - happy valentines day indeed!

    what an erotic piece - by far the most erotic and detailed poem ive read so far in the contest.

    well done. i can see why its done well in the past.

    emmyb


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    February 17

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    Erotic? this is more than erotic... tasty indeed!!!! This is the type of piece one wants to read over and over again....!!!! SCRUMPTIOUS!

    Becca


  • Swtpoetryman
    February 15

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    A HAPPY VALENTINES DAY INDEED FOR THE TWO OF YOU IF YOU ASK ME!

    I thought this one was an invitation to me until I got the part that mentioned the sweet pussy! HE! HE! A sweet and sensual piece, Jeremy - that should garner you another shiny trophy! Thanks SO MUCH for giving me the heads up on it in more ways than one, Brother!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

    PS - Where did you get those pictures of me and a couple of my sweet and sensual ladies for the background, Dude?


  • Dragonbabyx3
    February 15

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    A wonderful Acrostic! Ok, So I can never compare to it. I see that LOL. You MIGHT want to reread this Like "Caressing you in my arms as lift up your blouse" I think you are missing an "I" But other than that, Wonderful Job!


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    February 15

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    wow

    great job jeremy this is awsome write i love it from the beggining to the end great job amazing write thank you for entering my contest keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 14

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    I so love this from you! I love candle Hee Hee!! Wonderful job and I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest hon

    Cum inside of my mouth, I stick my two fingers inside of you
    Adding to your pleasure I run my tongue down to your
    Nice ass and then work my way back up to your pussy
    Dripping with lust and passion you get up and push me down
    Letting me relax as you take hold of my achingcock and swallow
    Every inch of it while massaging my balls




  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 14
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    Good luck bro.

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