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butterfly cry

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i am a butterfly that fly's in the sky and
dream about the past of past that we
can live and trust.

life is a boar living in the life
of a butterfly in the sky.
i seat and wonder what would
it be like if i was human living and
breathing and walking with everyone
and everything.

but times is hard and not on
my side for life. the hate and
anger is hard on a young butterfly
life like mine.

but this is a butterfly cry from
the that they want and the life
that was handed down to them

butterfly cry

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    March 14, 2009
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    So softly you have shared the hard truth of this life..a wonderfulpoetry..well thought piece...