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Kerosene

The first home I remember
is an 1800's country cottage
with a  barn and pond.
My bedroom had once been a pony's stall.
In the common room a Franklin stove.
Cast-iron black.

Apple trees, cheery trees,
strawberries, mint,
a broken brick well,
encased in forest
and daisy fields.
Horses and chickens,
turtles and dogs,
bunnies and birds,
I was friends with them all.
At night a swarm of bats
hunted water-skeeters
in pitch black.

So until seven years old
at home the facts are neat and clean;
It snows in the winter
The bunnies appear in the spring
The birds fly back in the summer
and autumn smells like kerosene.

Author notes

Axe Tither Mizzens

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  • This an excellent snapshot of remembered youth.

    Good write.