These lips, sweet smell of liquor,
You get that heady feeling.
Specially in those eyes, amor,
I can see you see clothes peeling.
The music sways my soul tonight,
Or, that's what you'd think.
You know that this is going right
When you offer me that drink.
I lean as you sweep in close,
I'm burning up the floor.
Bet you don't know it's just a dose,
I've done this all before
Hungry Love's the heat in me
Cloaked around a frozen heart.
I'd dream of love, but reality
Has drifted us apart
Another puff of that cigarette.
You're additced I know for sure.
Lean in to me as you let
The smoke from my lips soar.
In your head this would last a while,
But, the twirls just disappear.
Like every crooked burning smile,
Like the one that drew you near
It's not your fault you felt it too,
But the table's turned too much.
You've just begun what I've been through,
(The) Same Old Blood Rush (with a new touch).
Author notes
AP name - HangingSoul
I don't know what to make of it... but i'm just using some raw emotions to put together a poem based on a title i felt would make sense...
i've been hurt in love so many times that now it's become like a habit...an addiction....i keep getting myself into situations that i know will hurt me... and i keep hoping it won't happen... but i know it will...and this poem is just about revenge...about hurting someone...the way you've been hurt...
A contest entry
- 75 Titles To Choose From[Prewrites Allowed Now] by stargazer..
650 points, ended April 10, 93 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i know the last two lines don't flow... but they're enders and take the poem back to it's title,
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Whoa I never saw this one actually. I love it! Especially the second to last line... I might steal that someday. Just a heads up.
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I like the title. I enjoyed the everyday things you used in here and then something like this "I'd dream of love, but reality
Has drifted us apart "? Just beautiful. Good Luck and please check out some of my work?
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