I swear you carved him
to prove your self-assurance
(self-commitment to self-awareness,
self-comprehension, the recognition
of that form, star-reflected).
Of shrewd eyes you're allowed two;
they stare unaffected by the moon's single leer--
(you painted his brow running down to
enrapture us with your own regal slant, no?)
And one-sided face, the ignoble rock
had no hope for grin; he sneers
as you might with more space
between lips, less self-control
between ears--
He looks to you and you, out ahead,
but both too self-engaged, self-amazed
not to stare at your camera lens distortion
or the turn of his jaw in your well-strung chin,
or the retelling of his glory against far-planet's gleam--
the constant introspection of control.
For who shall pull the moon from his place?
Not worried as your seat,
and you watch him not at all,
but tilt into your posture
with the eagerness of the self-contained
(self-maintained, self-restored).
You do not swing in the presence of the stars,
but allow them to augment the sky behind you—
much like the moon (that I swear
you carved in self-aggrandizement,
self-portrait), who does seem
more willing to speak, but less able
and you there-- capable and silent,
but for your stance--
the pull others lose through charade,
but in your shrewd eyes—
the steady sheen of the
self-preserved, self-esteemed, a man of his own hand, unperturbed
by the heights to which he's striven,
unabashed by how easily he sits in the heavens.
Author notes
Prompt: http://www.flickr.com/photos/aeillill/3020518363/in/pool-854838@N24
Alternate title: Smirking Man Cross-Legged on a Smirking Moon in Profile
Photo credit: 110708-011 by aeillill
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- Paper Moon by ea.
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Comments
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I am quite speechless at your entry. I am planning to put out a collection of these poems along with the photos from Stevechasmar who has given me his permission. I will have to check with this aeillill person whose photo you picked. Steve also has the hepped-up on goofballs account which has some paper moons in it and ephermally yours is his too. Please look through them and see if there are more that inspire you and get back to me.


