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Dancing

Here we go;

another place appears before my eyes
&
the light evaporates over my hands.

The lightning lies like rock candy -
hard against the metal click,
riding softly in my mouth.
Blue buzzing fills the air,
and here we go again;

faster.

Faster.

Atmosphere - can we feel it anymore?
Here my heart lays,
and the stitches are coated with mint.

Jump over it, he says.
I can no longer feel what exists.
What might it mean to me?

Author notes

I have no idea about this. It's just flowed from listening to a song.

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  • Sexy Zexy
    March 24, 2009
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    woooooo...... it made me dizzy! I ike it! Not much to say on it...