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My Silent Screams Beseech

How could they ever know
They call me art, but depth has it's hidden meanings
I have cried my call for years
And alas am welcomed by no helping hands

The only hands I have ever known
Have tortured my heart in ways I can not mend
Oh, God, am I done for?
Please, somebody help me.

I see children pass my face
Only boredom recompenses
I see men and women
Ignoring all common senses

Am I to scream here, day by day
And never be alerted to any guidance?
Dear God, help me!
For I am truly done for in this world they call art.

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  • Everlasting Ellen
    February 22

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    A deep poem full of questions and a deep well of emotions Well done, and welll said.

    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.