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When Our Song Doesn't Really Have A Title

Let the stars keep their fires tonight

    - We'll dance by our own light

 

Let the moon rule its dark sky

    - We need no directions to fly

 

Let the birds sing their sorrowful songs

    - You're the tune that keeps me strong

 

Let the waters merge into the sea

    - Their efforts can't keep you from me

 

Let the clouds flush out all their tears

    - The rain will wash away my fears

 

Let the leaves change and start to fall

    - Tell me that we're above them all

 

Let these two hearts continue to beat

    - You're the best I'll ever meet

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  • Vintage Chiffon
    May 12

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    This was very very sweet. Cute poem but I thought that the ending could have been wrapped up better in a different way. Although this definitely made me smile I think some things could be fixed. Thank you very much for your entry in my contest and the best of luck to you.
    <3 Damien