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There is a conversation
inside my heart.

My hand in yours,
silent smiles
tell the tale.

There is so much more
than the words we say,
the phrases we let slip.

There is a conversation
inside my heart.

Faraway stars,
show me the way
back to you.

To say hello again,
a conversation
among the stars.

There is a conversation
inside my heart,
waiting to break free.

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I am in a long-distance relationship, with my boyfriend, who I love with all my heart.
(no, I am not another naive teenager)

Option 2: Write me a poem about being truly in love with someone, not a crush, not a fling, true love.

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 20

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    Beautifully Touching...

    Thank you for sharing your sentimental Valentine's Day love poem with us! I'm wishing you all the best!! Peace, xx Cyn