What is it about wrongs that feel so right
About loyalties that aren't as strong as they should be
Why can't I just look the other way
From this speeding train that has become my life
I steal only one glance
Ok maybe two
It makes my heart beats faster
Ready to explode
I feel so guilty every day this continues
For my hidden disire grows
But I'll continue to make sure that no one ever knows
Author notes
I am not positive about how this turned out because I was trying not to ryme (As you can see I failed on the last line.) and not ryming is out of my element. I would love feedback on how to make this better.
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A contest entry
- Option's are always fun, Especially for L♥VE by DelaneyDisaster.
750 points, ended April 13, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very good write. And thank you for clearing it up, (a lot of the people didn't put the option, thank you for telling me though, it was no inconvenience at all.) But this was exactly what i wanted to feel, and see. you captured the emotion's wuite well in it. Very good job.
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Could you please tell me the option used?
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I apologise I wrote in authors notes number 2 but i should have clarified that it is for the contest. I am terribly sorry for the inconvinence.
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