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Her Eyes

Can you really say those words to her
that you found someone else,
that she's no longer good enough for you?
You turn to say the words
and you see everything
everything you've ever dreamed of and so much more
you know she's more than you deserve
but is it worth it?
Is it worth it to turn around 
and look in her eyes
seeing the tears fall
her knees collapse,
and to leave her on the ground torn?
Is it worth it?
to leave her wondering if she deserved it?
can you look in her eyes
and tell her how you truly feel for once?
Can you?
Can you?

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  • xeroabyss II
    April 26

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    Desire makes the mind selfish, which makes the soul callous, and causes the heart to become cold.
    Thus we are all capable of commiting the cruelest acts of insensitivity.


  • Shuberth
    April 15

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    heartfelt, its so sad as i was reading this i could this girl in tears as he walks away
    her emotions showed very well, well written


    Shuberth


  • Lexie
    February 19
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    wow i love this, the imagery is amazing! great job