Our eyes are the mirror of our heart
which reflects the images of our emotions
that arise from our pain and pleasure.
Thank you for reading.
by Sukhdarshan
Feb.13, 2009
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Interesting and very truthful words here..as the eyes are a window to our soul.
Thank you for the write!
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That is very true and very wise my friend
true my eyes and our eyes show it and unveil a lot.
Thank you for reminding us.
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thank you so much Nazim for reading my small poem..."EYES"..it is the only way to enter into the heart!....thanks...grateful
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INTELLIGENT WRITE
very wise my friend , this is true, true indeed.
well put, standing novation.
peace be with you
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Whoa! Nice! Someone you know must have amazing eyes for you to have penned this one. Short but very, very sweet. I especially like how you included the pain along with the pleasure, 'cause there(the pain) is where we all really connect isn't it? Great write. Later, AG
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You bring out the movement of the spirit within the body, how it interprets the outside forces as pain or pleasure and then touches all parts within and causes reactions that layer one upon the other that are then brought directly to the mirror of our heart, the eyes. Though this write has few words it is immeasureably effective . Love this one, Darshan. Peace always, Rhonda
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indeed... I ditto Ms alby's comment. my eyes are unreadable but I hope someone would see the truth in them. Thank you so much for sharing this piece. It is very reflective.
Happy Valentine's Day
Anna Lee
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Anna, Thank you so much for your comment. Eyes speek louder than words. It is always nice to see your valuable comment on my poetry. Thank you.
All the best....Grateful
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So true. The eyes reflect all that is held within, but only few have the ability to 'see' that. A surprisingly short poem from you, but it speaks volumes. Very nice...alby
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Thank you so much Alby. All your comments are beyond my perception....Thank you so much for your seamless kind support...Grateful
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