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Dont do it

    Looking into vacant eyes in this photo ,
  Trying to see there pain.
  Missing them forever ,
  Knowing  there never coming back again.
  Why did they do it ?
  Did they even care?
  Did they even WONDER how there parents would react when    they   
  Found them lying there?
  How there friends would cope?
  Sisters ,
Brothers 
Boyfriend or girlfriend?
Father or mother?
Do they even care?
I guess we’ll never know seeing as there not here anymore.
Suicide seems ruthless ,
&& selfish
&& wrong.
But did you EVER stop to wonder they think about before they go .. ?
If there telling you they love you?
Or Trying to show they really care?
Or thinking you’d be happier with out them even there?
For all the Kids who ran away!
Did you think about THERE thoughts?
How desperate they were to leave?
How much they thought?
If you were even going to miss them.
Or notice they weren’t there?
Hoping you think its not in spite of attention.
&& how they were just scared?
For all the kids who drink && do drugs !
There not bad!
There confused hurt ,
Mourning for something lost they never had .
These kids && teens aren’t as they seem.
Just give them a CHANCE .
Don’t judge by looks ,
Or there favorite bands.
Or the clothes they wear .
Or there hair or there smell .
Just LOVE  them.
Give them a hand .
Suicide isn’t always the best ,
I’ D give you a chance .
Don’t drink.
Don’t run.
TRY to have fun .
Live life!
&& put down that gun!

Author notes

This is for anyone who has felt this way , even if you didnt do those things! i have done them all , well , not suicide ovbiously , well not all the way but i know how it feels . && i want you or someone to get some meaning out of this <3

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Comments

  • This made me want to cry. You're poems are always so meaningful which makes you an amazing writier, seriously. Your messages are like, amazing. And they are something people really need to hear. You should make a book. =)


    • joee-143
      February 20
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      Should i ?

      Hah . Yah , it will be all picture book of stick animals , im NOT a good book writer . xD


  • Englandgirl2008
    February 14

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    I got the meaning of it very well.
    I tried to sucide about 7 times.
    I feel horrible about. I got the
    message out of this poem. thanks.
    Everyone needs a chance.