Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Barren Silence

The silence was deafening
as snowfall slowly pirouetted
in the shimmering Moon lit…
Artic night.

In a list

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • BellaAmare
    January 3

    Edit | Reply
    I really loved the last line. Great job. I think of the north pole and how many stars much be visible in the sky and smile.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 23, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful, there's something amazing about the cold that most people seem to miss out, but I don't. I love it.

  • poets whisper gold member
    February 15, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    the thought of snow flakes doing a pirouette is so beautiful. I watched snow falling so softly and gently the other day and it is like a dance ... good job.


  • Meroza
    February 14, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    I am sure for those who dosne't live with snow 70% of they're life this is rather interesting, but sadly today it didn't catch my interest


  • Rovingone gold member
    February 13, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    Excellent use of words, economy with a dinamic message. It puts the picture in your mind and allows you to paint in detail.

1 - 5 of 5