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Release

I fight to hold on
my grip ever slipping
to the person i used to be

the happiness is dwindling
the joy i used to feel has left
all I am
all I fear I will become
is a shell of the person
i used to be

I rack my mind
my soul
trying to force myself to feel again
feel anything but this feeling
this forever anger that has gripped my heart
my soul
my being
and i cry
"please release me!"

I crave to be the person I used to be

I need to be the person I used to be

I want to be the person I used to be

Please release me





Author notes

I have been stuck in this seems to be never ending rut of, i want to label it depression but i dont think its that sever yet, i just dont feel happiness or really any emotion because i have been consumed with anger towards my mom, trying to make people happy and down right worrying about everything and anything.... i miss myself... i miss being happy... i miss caring about other people like i used to.... I hate what it feels like im becoming

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  • tellnotalesxx
    February 13

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    I know what it feels like because I go through the same. It's really hard but we have to become better. This poem really touched me because It was really good and I can relate to it sooo welll. ""please release me!"

    I crave to be the person I used to be

    I need to be the person I used to be

    I want to be the person I used to be

    Please release me". Those were the best lines of your poems and sometimes I find my self screaming the same thing to only find no one hears me. Beautiful poem

    melijelii