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Donald Ray Manasco

During times of happiness and disgrace,
Others have left while you remained.
Needing more than a friend, I met you
And, together, we are walking through life.
Loving each other, in spite of differences,
Depending on one another to keep striving and

Realizing we are not perfect, but, human in every way.
Always ready to defend our love,
You make me smile, even when I am angry.

My love for your grows deeper every day
And I continue yearning for stronger intimacy.
Nestled in your heart is where I shall remain,
Abiding by our vows of love, life and forever after.
So, my darling, I wish you Happy Valentine's Day.
Come and feast on passion I offer,
Obliging me to do the same.





I love you, sweetheart.

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  • aceray
    June 27

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    This is simply beautiful!!!! There are tears welling up in my eyes as I'm writing this....just simply beautiful!!!

    Rey


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 17
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    It's always nice to meet someone who cares, no matter the differences between the two hearts, love seems to always find a way. This was penned very nicely my dear sis, thanks for sharing your loving soul.

  • A touching and heartfelt dedication to one for whom you care. Nobody is perfect ... everyone is human, and that is why we have (or should have) scope to reach for tolerance and forgiveness, love and understanding, within ourselves as gifts we may offer to those others in whom we place belief.

  • judmc
    June 17

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    Nice poem

    A nice well written poem about meeting one's soulmate
    and all the nice feelings that this can bring and the yearning for a deeper relationship.Quite a heart searching journey through the senses. Nice Poem.
    ....George....
    P.S.rather ironical your plea to read your poems when
    after my 1st donation to your worthy cause you said
    I must read some of yours.I'm still waiting though,i'm not desperate but it would have been nice
    .....George.....

  • Well this is absolutely beautiful. A lovely acrostic and such a true sentiment. Very sweet poem here.


    whisper


  • Ez Writer silver member
    April 25

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    A beautiful , passionate &
    romantic poem and dedication
    A most charming read - indeed !!
    Best wishes , Friend Easy


  • Broken-Rickie
    April 22
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    Such a beautiful dedication and write...


  • Erik Ambrose gold member
    March 2

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    Thank you for sharing this with me today. Uou have done a fantastic job on this. I wish you well in this contest that you have entered and am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future.

  • A touching and heartfelt dedication to one for whom you care. Nobody is perfect ... everyone is human, and that is why we have (or should have) scope to reach for tolerance and forgiveness, love and understanding, within ourselves as gifts we may offer to those others in whom we place belief.


  • liltulip gold member
    March 2

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    what a lovely

    piece of tribute and love...such honesty in your words, thank you for sharing this with us at AP, I enjoyed it very much!


  • bw43
    February 23
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    very pretty love poem


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 21

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    Beautiful!

    Such a lovely dedication to the one you adore.
    Thanks for sharing here sis, much love!

    Bro Timothy


  • grammabuff
    February 19
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    Another beautiful write. Only one nit:1st line, 3rd stanza, should be you not your. Buff


  • just mercedes gold member
    February 18
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    Very sweet and loving. Best of luck to you both.

  • Olea
    February 16

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    that's great. well done. a sweet sentiment for the season. if you are doing rewrites, i think it will only get better and better. regards.


  • penman gold member
    February 13
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    Excellent

    What a terrific write. So very loving and well said. Best of luck in the contest

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