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Weighing Facts

Loneliness bubbles slowly to the surface
seeping from weary pores and running across
prostrate feelings of regret and nostalgia

I would salvage some measure of resistance
but the necessary motions seem too taxing
within this cloud of disillusionment.

Change is inevitable.
So disconsolatory and exacting a statement
in times such as these.

But still so unchangably true.



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  • Vostro
    February 15

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    You need a catalyst.

    The reaction is already taking place at a linear rate, albeit hesitantly, but with the catalyst it will advance exponentially.

    It's called "chemistry".


    • Trapped Rage
      February 16
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      You aren't subtle. But that doesn't stop you from being right, I'll admit.

      But in my defense, I didn't have that particular subject in mind, rather the fact that I was changing jobs and thus social networks.

      • Vostro
        February 16
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        You present an omnirelevant subject.
        My opinion is sanctified by observation.

        Oh, but it's a good thing to make new friends. New, GOOD friends. Yes?

        What's wrong with a blank slate, a tabula rasa?