I like you,
Or should I say I love you?
Does it even matter to you?
Why can't you see me,
Are you blind?
Or am I just that seethrough?
I wish you would hold me,
And tell me you loved me too,
But I guess it's obvious,
That's a dream that will never come true.
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (O) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended February 22, 2009, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like the conflicting thoughts in this piece and believe that we all can certainly relate to it on some level. Nice job.
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Awwwwwww D:
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