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Heavy tired eyes scry down on old sins.
An older mind scowls at a younger body;
the light seems to fade from the older mind's world...

anger creeps out of the cold shadows.
The feel,the need,and the desire for the answer of the younger body

stir in the older mind's heart.

 

The anger and madness raps it's slinky,long arms around both mind and body.....

wrath engulfs all objects in the younger body's path.

 

DESTROY IT ALL!

 

The older mind scrys deeper into these dark and  pleasureful thoughts,

the heart of both old mind and younger body become one and beat like the drums of war,

"kill it all, kill it all, kill it all," become the only words that slither out of their mouth.

 

The final blow;

the killing touch that finally steps into complete anger and despair.

 

Then the sound of an angel singing the long forgotten hymns of love and forgiveness fill the mind and body.

The beast of anger sulks back into the cold shadow of the hell made to imprison .

Song fills the old mind and younger body with peace and calmness,

and forgiveness is given again.

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This is a poem my husband wrote and it's supposed to be the same person, but at two different points in his life. Looking back he remembers his younger self.

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  • penman gold member
    February 25
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    Wonderful

    Very reflective write. Delves deeply into the areas of thought deep within. Thank you for sharing.