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Daydream


His eyes flicker with devious delight
She savors the weight of his stare
He senses the wanton vixen she could be tonight
And wonders if he should dare

Her ample breasts are barely contained in her blouse
A simple glance is all that is needed
He nonchalantly makes rounds to lock up the house
His kiss traces her cleavage ever so heated

She turns to expose that which his lips have brushed
Baring hardened nipples for him to devour
But he has restraint and will not be rushed
This teasing of his could last an hour

Impatient she removes all that holds back her breasts
Presses them softly against his face
She can feel how fast and hard his heart beats in his chest
He resists her urges and keeps his pace

Tongues touch in hot lust
Hands wander to places only shared by lovers
Her goal to remove his clothes becomes a must
Her desires are wanton, his cock she smothers

Soft kisses, flickering tongue, her breath is barely there
Hot wanting mouth devours every inch of him
His hands are fists in her tangled hair
His self control is wearing thin

He pushes her off, pinning her to the floor
Sucks, bites and pinches her nipples
Tells her it’s time to please his little whore
She can feel the lust rush through her in ripples

His fingers enter her hot dripping hole
Next is his mouth covering her clit
She arches her back, her orgasm takes it’s toll
So much pleasure she feels her head may just split

Now she is begging to feel him inside
Deep, hard and furious he thrusts and groans
She climbs on top to finish the ride
Her rocking and grinding make him erupt with deafening moans

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  • orgasm fire works i really enjoyed this you brought a lot of steam to the contest with this good luck in the contest


  • Gunther gold member
    March 23

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    Very hot and great imagery. I followed the lustful events all the way down the page. This is not normally the stuff I read but I really enjoyed this. Welcome to AP.


  • goat1826
    March 6
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    I like this poem
    Hot and sexy
    Very erotic and great imagery
    Keep it up


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 13

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Happy Valentines Day ~

    Quite an erotic tale; the flow of imagery and heat rolls down the page flawlessly engaging the reader from the first line til the end - Nicely done



    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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    • jodolphingirl
      February 13
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      Thank you

      It's my first attempt at writing since I was 15. Appreciate the feedback.


  • Happy3
    February 13

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    What a wonderful sight! I was bewitched. Wish it could be you and me...lol. A real erotica I must say.


    • jodolphingirl
      February 13
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      *Blushes*

      This poem is a gift for my boyfriend. I appreciate that it moved you :-)

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