Looking back on our lives,
Looking back through mature eyes,
Many reasons I can find
(Several reasons I recognise)
Because of you I was blind.
Melted butter through your lips
Were the lies of your mind.
Sweet lying lips and hips,
Both swaying in my mind;
Swaying, stirring as merchant ships.
Crashing waves of lies,
Sweet confusion rose the tide
Of lust and infatuation;
Your sweet body gave insinuation
(Swaying in my eyes)
Of pleasure found through domination.
Opaque was your desguise.
Your strong, taught body of seduction
Plotting still of my destruction,
The demolition of my self-control-
The compromise of my whole being.
(How well you played your role:
Sweetness wrapped around surprise.)
Velvet touches as if dreaming,
Touching down into my soul.
Deep penetration was your goal.
Now inceneration of my self control.
Comments
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this poem is very different for me, i see a rhyme form thats constant throughout i find this appealing though there are no breaks or stanzas the constant rhyme keeps it going in consistent flow, the poem is also full of great imagery enabling me to see the scene the love here is abundant and i really enjoyed this
abigail
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