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Be My Valentine

 

Before you came into my life,

Existence for me was one of strife.

 

Melancholia kept me bound in chains,

Your love alleviated all my pains.

                                                                                                      

Valiantly you saved me from solitude,

Accepting my flaws and attitude. 

Loving me now for twenty-five years,
Easing my burdens and soothing my tears.
Never could mere words express my heart,
The way I feel about you and all you impart.
I love you with all my heart and soul,
Nirvana is ours, together we're whole. 

E'er through life with God we'll stroll.

 

      

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Dedicated to my wonderful Husband...Gary.

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 20

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    Beautifully Sensual & Romantic!!

    Thank you for your wonderful Valentine's Day entry in my contest!! I'm wishing you all the best!! Peace, xx Cyn


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    February 13

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    Brilliant and heartfelt acrostic with rhyme for your husband, Gary! My husband and I are also in our 25th year.

    Grand poem with perfect sentiment!

  • jodygirl
    February 13

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    What a lovely sentiment for you and your husband to enjoy on Valentines Day. I'm sure you'll get roses and candy for this one. Best of luck in the contest. Have a blessed day.

    In God's Love,
    Joan


  • Frogzter gold member
    February 13

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    This is really beautiful! It is the same feelings I have for my own hubby! I hope you let him read this wonderful loving write! Happy Valentines Day!

    All my love,

    Frogz~