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Tears From Someone Else's Eyes

I saw a lot of them already..
  and they won't seem to stop...
may be because there's really no reason to be,
  no reason for the subject to drop.

A woman on her highschool,
  yes, a woman because she loved,
but because of that love, she was labeled as a fool,
  misery, heartbreak, and stupid, she was dubbed.

I saw a man, three years of age,
  yes a man, for he had loved,
yes, he loved so much, measuring it would break a gauge,
  unfortunate events soon followed, wounds throbbed.

A mother, and a virgin one,
  a mother because she loved,
but because of love, all was gone,
  people were gone, and she can only look above.

Tears from them, yes, I could see them,
  and it's all because of this love, had it been,
I thought love is not waste, rather a perfect gem,
  but with those tears, my love grows thin.

I saw all of them already,
  yes, a woman because she loved,
smiling and really, she's cheerful,
  a  determined person is now she is dub.

A man, three years of age,
  yes, a man for he had love,
and he grows full of wisdom, more like a sage,
wise, courageous, was it because of the wounds that once throbbed?

A mother, and a virgin one,
  yes, a mother because she loved,
she carries her baby, and she didn't need a man,
  people were crowding, she's there - above.

Tears from them, yes, I could see them,
  and it's all because of love did they fell,
truly, love is a diamond, a perfect gem,
and with those tears, love breaks my shell.

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Lousy rhyming, but I love my poem...

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