Bored to death is what im feeling right now
Im feeling frustrated and devastated somehow
This emptiness is killing me
The un named feeling what the hell could it be ?
My feelings and emotions are locked inside so no one could see
Pretending that everything is fine and with everything I agree
But deep inside I always say no and disagree
Im done with crying I have no more tears
My heart got weak, how can I survive how can I face my fears?
and Im here left alone with no one by my side
My boo left me and my relatives died
People are staring at me and theres no place to hide
Im sitting in this old abandoned house wishing I was dead
This silence is about to blow my head
Im not afraid to die any more ive been through a lot and I think its time to rest
I wish reaper could be my guest
Ive got nothing but this knife to stab my self
Theres no place in my arm to cut in , after it became full of scars
I want my self back, im done with wishing upon the stars
I need someone to talk to and share
All my hate, love and care
Someone listens and ease the pain
Its not about being depressed its about losing ur brain
My head is spinning I need to sit
Standing alone this time is more like having balance on a thread
Or can I say an edge of a knife
When you used to tell me you'll marry me and ill be your wife
But its was nothing but a lie
The only way made me better was to cry
Crying on things that were never mine
I thought ill be fine
But after you broke my heart and stood on it
About what happened between us I regret
Your lies were like a knife that stab my heart somehow
But I realized many things now..
when I remember our past I cry out loud and my voice is fading away
asking about my heart ? well my heart ismelting day by day
I see death in my eyes every single day
Should I scream and shout to be better?
Or should I say nothing and stay quiet for ever?
And in the end I ask my self and wonder
But never get to an answer
An answer for all the questions that are running through my head
An answer for why all these razors are on my bed ?
Why is my heart black instead of red?
Why do every time I love someone they end up dead?
Should I live or should I die?
Should I fool my self and lie?
My eyes are dried and there are no more tears left to cry
Right now im slitin my throat after my last pathetic word GOODBYE
A contest entry
- Sorrow by XxSorrowfulxAngelxX.
1055 points, ended February 14, 2009, 19 entries
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Thanks alottt patty =D
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You did an awesome job of expressing the pain and confusion of a jilted love. The dark emotions that can be felt by such betrayal. The last line really ties this poem up nice and neat and I loved the lines:
"My feelings and emotions are locked inside so no one could see
Pretending that everything is fine and with everything I agree
But deep inside I always say no and disagree"
excellent write !
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Thanks alot penman and jenn
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Wonderful
A very powerful though very dark write. So may emotions shared. Thank you for sharing
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Wow this is really good. I really liked the part:
"My feelings and emotions are locked inside so no one could see
Pretending that everything is fine and with everything I agree
But deep inside I always say no and disagree "
I know this very very very well.
Takecare,-Jenn
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aww thanks .. im glad u liked it =D !!
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thank you very much. I like your poem i could feel the pain from standing in those shoes.
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awww thanks alot im glad you liked it xx and thanks for leaving a comment ang giving me your opinion
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This was really good. A little to long for me but it was an awesome write. I like how even though this might not be true, I can still feel the pain and sorrow from this poem. Nice write. Thank you for entering and good luck. Keep up the good work.
~Kayla
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im glad you liked it =D
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aaaaah thanks dude =D !!
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Nicely put! That long peom of URs is so emotional. I felt each word U wrote. The pain is so obvious. My fave part was in the end, but also other parts... were gr8 as well.
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