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Freeze Frame # 2

Missing image
With his arms outstretched
he only wanted a hug,
to warm his frozen heart.

But a nibble on the nose
flashing camera would expose,
appreciation of sculpters art.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 23

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    Ah this is nice, so abract it kind of makes me smile. I like the title of these short pieces too, they are like a freeze frame.


  • daviscth silver member
    March 9
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    Thank you for giving me the chance to enjoy this wonderful poem again. Your words brought the picture to life.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    February 17

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    Oh, how cute. Great piece. I really enjoyed it! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!

  • daviscth silver member
    February 13

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    I really like this poem and it goes perfect with the picture. Your imagery is adorable. Thank you for posting in my contest.

  • poets whisper silver member
    February 13

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    I love this. The image as well as the poetry have captured my heart. Thank you so much for sharing


  • hyper thing
    February 13
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    I liked it it was really good
    dood luck in the contest

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