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Untill

I dream of you
A part of me,breathing inside
Still budding
And very much alive

I imagine your face
Those lil' hands and starry eyes
Lotus shaped lips
Your cries and your smiles

But it's not that easy
I wish I could explain
This world just won't accept you
You won't be loved or welcomed

Just like me, a HIV positive
You would be alone, longing for suppourt
Just like me, you too
Would fell robbed of emotions, of life

So today I have burried my conscience
It won't be easy for me
But I can't give you this life
Which I know just can't be lived.

For now mumma wants you to wait
Somewhere above in the heavens
Untill this world understands
That people like us, are humans too.

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