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fill me

Fill my heart with passionate desire
Set the mind alight with hungry fire
Inspire the actions of a noble sire
and let me climb the heights of the tallest spire

Ignite the righteous soul inside
your joyous love, in me confide
and from you, I can not hide
For in the heavens, you do abide

Influencing and changing, the world around
with complete control, over light and sound
You stand high above sea and ground
Calling to him others, eager to be found

Set the mind alight with hungry fire

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  • condor gold member
    February 13, 2009
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    I thinjk this was wonderfully written and i like the smooth slow monotone voice that came from it. This sang and made me smile cause it had that sunday stroll effect to it. You should write a lot more. You are very talented and I would love to be able to come here and just read. Thank you.


  • Mr.
    February 13, 2009
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    Very nice. I enjoyed this.