I'll be your whore
[if you'll be my valentine.]
My cute little boyfriend to kiss on the lips
[& fuck in the dark.]
Because when you feel like a discarded
porcelain doll, shoved under the bed
[being treated like shit is better
than not being treated at all.]
So I'll sew shut my lips
[to never again speak a word of the pain]
& cut a thousand little crisscrosses into my heart
[to keep the blood flowing]
& drink back the salty tears that
burn like acid until one day my body
eats itself from the inside out.
Until then, you won't find a girl as easy as me;
[so enjoy it while it lasts.]
A contest entry
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I definately agree, being treated like crap is better than having nothing. I almost want it sometimes as there is only a small difference between love and hate as both are fueled with extrme passion and cruelty is a sign of such.
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Very strong wordage and imagery here.
Great job with this piece! I can feel the emotions here. -
I like the way you express through your poems... lots of them get caught up in the imagery and fail to express... well done...
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I loved the last two lines, they hit like a train....
Hun, I know things are bad, but they'll get better. We'll sort it out together, I promise.
I love you xx -
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I know things will get better. Thanks hun. I love you too. xx
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