Laying in my puddle of lust
Body searing just from the thought of you
Thighs drenched from the sweet nectar
Dripping from my flower garden
Nipples harden between my finger tips
As I caress my breasts gently
Sliding my hand down opening my slit
Pushing my fingers deep inside
Stroking my dark wet valley
Singing my own hymn of euphoria
Bringing my fingers to my lips
To taste my honeyed dew drops
Droplets of sweat on my brown skin glistens
Plunging back inside my hips move
In unison with each vigorous stroke
My eyes rolling in the back of my head
Thumb rubbing on my hard jewel
My fevered skin begins to tingle
Squeezing my soft smooth thighs together
As I feel the intensity through my curvaceous body
Moans coming from my lips
I start to quiver in ecstasy
While the raging storm erupts
Exploding my cream of passion
On my hand
Author notes
Published Feb.13
I do not claim this picture with this write to be my own. Picture found on google images.
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Comments
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the lay-out was perfect and the imagery wonderfull as ALWAYS
with that,,,, I must retire for the night,,,,lol,,, ga nite HOTCHOCOLATE -
Hot, hot and more hot
chocolate to sweeten my day. That is good erotica. I envy the men that have spent time with you. A woman that knows the essence of pleasure.
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wow this was hot!
your the second or third person to use the image you did, but your the only one whos image actually worked with the poem.
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Let me do that for you next time. Good write.
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Ahh the way I've been feeling recently...been so horny recently and my boyfriend isn't down here, will be a few weeks and has already been a few weeks as go college separate places, a guy I like and who has feelings for me could help but not in person either though hopefully soon but wouldn't cheat and so wouldn't go with anyone else. Ohh I hate going solo, it's no fun.
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Very nice sweetie, oh so hot, as you know how to do.
Beautiful....Best wishes in the contests
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Oh, I love this. It's so, so HOT. My favorite stanza is the second to the last....same as everyone else. Phenomenal word choice and placement. Damn! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It's an honor to have you show your work here.
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I'd love to lie next to you and to follow what you do. I'm sure I'd have a multiorgasm that way.
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Thumb rubbing on my hard jewel
My fevered skin begins to tingle
Squeezing my soft smothhs thighs together
As I feel the intensity through my curvacious body....
What beautiful an activity!
I'd love to watch your hard jewel, honey, and would love to kiss it...
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DAMN, THOSE FINGERS MUST TASTE SWEAT - AND NOW I'M OFF TO BEAT ME MEAT!
Don't forget to save some of that cream of passion for a naughty boy and hungry man like me, Baby! I truly enjoyed the wet and juicy show - and now I have to run to have some solo fun and make some sweet cream of my own with your blessing - of course!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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I feel the SIZZLE!
This is very hot.... Smokin' hot if i do say so myself! Wonderful write you have here! As always a pleasure to read! xoxo Miranda
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MMMMMMMMM Hottie, you did it again. So sexy.
I love your mind..
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Very Erotic
This is a very erotic and tastefully writen poem.Images I get are of a woman in love with someone and she loves her body and is comfortable in her skin as she reads herself with her own emotion and touch like a topographical map very, very hot.
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excellent
wow, truly amazing. This so sizzles. Great job. Best of luck in the contest.
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Ok-now woman, you have me going here; will now have to put my pen to good use. Truly a pleasure (no pun) reading your fabulous works.
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oh how i am so in love with your words. this is a great break from angst lol. I wouldnt know what to do if someone wrote me poetry like this...guess ill just dream lol. well done and much love. I will forever return here for my lustful fix!
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Singing my own hymn of euphoria
my goodness do i need to come put these huge lips of mine on you of course they would cost
honey you need a licking bath you are being to devilish lolz damn!
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Master baiting...!!!!!!!
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Another hot and sensual piece!
You really brought this picture to life my dear.
I love these lines:
"Thumb rubbing on my hard jewel
My fevered skin begins to tingle
Squeezing my soft smooth thighs together
As I feel the intensity through my curvaceous body"
Well done and keep it up my friend!
Jeremy0826
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Again, excellent, descriptive and very visual. Slower paced, more seductive and sensual this one.
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