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No where to turn

She's lost in this crazy
World. Looking around
trying to find out where
She belongs. Confused
She thinks No where to
turn.

She's lost and confused
There's no where to turn.
Wanting to be set free
from everything. Wanting
to live with one not wanting
to leave the other.

She's still alone in the dark.
Still trying to find out where
she truly belongs. There's
no where to turn.

Author notes

Sorry if it doesn't make sense. To help you better yet understand, think of your situation then re-read it and hopefully you'll get it. Good luck and I hope all works out for you.

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  • sarah felicity
    February 26
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    I Love it.
    I was once there.


  • Insane-Joe
    February 18

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    nice poem..good imagery..but you have a spelling error in your title..i cant tell whether its supposed to be "no where to run" or "no where to turn"


  • Tqop
    February 14

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    Very Inspiring.

    I like it and understand it.
    I hope that you do very well in this contest.
    We all have hope and Faith keep hope alive.

    Write on.


  • flounder416
    February 13

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    awesome

    I really like this poem. It hits home if you know what I mean. Thank you for entering and I wish you the best of luck!


  • hamid
    February 13

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    woow what a confusion. Nice poem. is it about you or some body else. any how a lovely poem. how beautifully have you express you feelings and thoughts and molded them in the form of words. I really like it.
    BE HAPPY
    ALI

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