With her teeth she tweaks her nipple
Ready to burst
Her pussy drizzles sweet essence
Down her soft luscious thighs
Author notes
Published Feb.13
I do not claim this picture used with this write as my own. Picture found on google images.
A contest entry
- Best February Prewrites from These Dates: by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended March 2, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you did it again
very short though but very nice the pic did it justice to the poem
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yummy,,,,ahhhhhhh
you really do these exotic/erotic ones sooooooo yummy,,,opps i mean tastefully,,, can't wait to read more
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My...My...My...
now how in tha world, did I miss this one? 
So glad I returned the favor....I can't believe that I missed this 
Gre8t imagery on this,....short, sweet, and naughty 
my kind of mix.
-ephiphany
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Mmmmm....some juice fruit between the lips, nothing better.
Very well captured to get the reader hot in a short amount of words.
Good write.
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omg! lol this one got me all worked up
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SImply sweet and divine! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It's an honor to have you show your work here.
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Wow!
Wow!
tweaking the nipple!
how seducing!
ready to burst!
worth watching!
pussy drizzling the sweet essence!
how inviting!
essence moving down the luscious thighs!
what a sight!
Kisses, honey, all over your luscious thighs!
Gal2
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Yum
A picture is worth 20 words I guess.
Nice!!! A Lovely thought to ponder.
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oooo Happy valentine's day this is forplay
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SHORT & SWEET & RIGHT TO THE POINT IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE, HON!
DAMN! I want to pull and nibble on that juicy nipple and IF that is a lactating tit the treat will even be the creamier for it! YUMMY! Fuck, you are making me thirsty, Miss Hot Chocklat! Thanks for making me hard as all of your erotic pieces never fail to do!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Thats HOT. And as usual you did such a sensual job of it. mmmmmmm
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Just four lines...only a few words...and yet full of eroticism...enough to make my nipples grow hard and my ..... wet.
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decadently sensually erotica
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Now, this is very sensual and sweet. Keep penning dear, your the Queen and Fantasy!
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now, with four lines, at 9:30 in the morning, i am excited in more ways than one! I was never able to write erotic poetry, but damn, coming to read yours makes up for my lack of talent in that department. You make so many things run through my mind (and other places heh heh). well done!
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i just dont know what to do with you u are the curse of all things god damn
the serpent is on the loose people i am going to have you siezed i cant take all this my pussy is bound to be decieved shortly yes you need what i call the lips package which includes the forehead the nose tongue and lips god damn i am crackin up i don't know what to do with mrs roy
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i am a guy....but still went into the thoughts of this beautiful setting.......very nicely done.....cheers
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Yummy!
!!!Sexxxy!!!
!!!!Sweet!!!!
!!!Me gusta muncho!!!
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What a great game to play! lmao
Lovely work with this one and I love the
picture and background hon! Well done!
Jeremy0826
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