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Your Kisses.(Hay(na)ku)

Your
Sweet kisses
True bliss is

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  • piccola silver member
    February 13
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    bad bad bad!!! Six words ... whatever the form you broke my rules ... bad bad bad!


  • Shakes-spear
    February 13
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    very nice

    Five or six, it is still very sweet! Good luck in the contest! The Shaker