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Aurora Borealis

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The sky celebrates
A perfect day
Where the air is clean and crisp

In a dark blue night
Where lights flicker, dancing
Wearing bright and flawless colors

Caught only for a second

And then a new day comes
As if no different than
Before

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  • Giovanna Corvis
    February 13, 2009

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    Ooh, I loved reading this and you did so well with writing it! I like the roses thingy, wh ydon't I ever think to do something like that with my poems???

    -Andi


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 13, 2009

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    Aw, I love this Alaka! and on a clear, cold night away from the city here in Alaska, I often see the Aurora.

    Love, Michael.