Broken down,
Lost inside.
How can I heal this over whelming pain?
Feelings of anger,
Feelings of resentment,
Of the marriage I have that is no dream.
Unwanted and unloved,
From day to day,
I try my best to deal with the pain.
Been cut through shreds,
Always made to feel like I am a piece of shit.
For-ever drowning in my sorrow...
Seeking a divorce,
I know that is the first step I need to take.
Oh my god i realize i been taking this for 18 years
And how can I heal this ache?
Need to be loved,
Need to be wanted,
For-ever wishing for this to come to me.
I hope God will take pity on me,
And make my wishes come true.
Author notes
This is all true
A contest entry
- Sorrow by XxForeverFaithfulxX.
1055 points, ended February 14, 19 entries
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Comments
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This is very sad. I hope that what you're going through gets better and I'm sure it will. This poem was very sad but it's realistic and it just is amazing. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. Keep up the good work.
~Kayla


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well done!
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nice poem, a realistic and complete poem. Just check the spelling of Divorce in first line of third stanza. Don't mind its just a suggetion. overall its a complete and perfect poem I really like it.
Be Happy
Ali


