Animated love flows aplenty
Surrounding my sorrow
Dancing merrily, oblivious to my dilema.
Anger seethes as lovers swoon...
Memories, rusty and dull,
Impale my being with envy.
"Everything Happens For A Reason"
"He'll Live Forever In Your Heart"
"He Would Want You To Move On"
Cliche statements better left unsaid.
Lose your love to deaths agenda
THEN speak to me of letting go.
Leave me to spend the day of amour
Peacefully dreaming of tomorrow.
My catatonic Valentine's day.
A contest entry
- right now. . . by JinSays.
1006 points, ended February 17, 11 entries
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Comments
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I have, and I agree.
There's no loss like that of a loved one.
There's no closure, no answers, no real healing.
I get it.
Very well presented, strong emotion felt throughout.
I wish you happiness for the future,
and understanding. Empathy helps in there too.
We dont always know what another is truly going through, do we?
Love,
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Thanks for the read
And yeah, it's impossible to know what another is feeling and why... as you know.
It can be irratating when people (especially when they have absolutely no idea of what it's like to lose your spouse/loved one) put a limit on your grief arghhhhh lol.
Contest was great, thanx again
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I find it hard to come up with words to describe this poem, it is so moving and sad and so many things, love John
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Thanks John, It's just another 'theraputic' vent. LOL
Much love
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I Love You mommy! I'll be your valintine! =]
~Miranda LeAnn~
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TRhamx sweetness... XoXoXo
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very excellent write-strong
but sad
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Thank you very much
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