It's washing over me again
Crashing against my heart
Receding till I think of you
These feelings come in waves
Some stronger, some deeper
My heart flutters when you're near
Why is there a change
You confuse me so much
A moon affecting my tide
I've always gravitated toward you
Pulled in, only to be pushed away
You're drawing me back
I wonder if you know this
If you mean to lure me in
And steal my heart once more
But I also feel that maybe
You feel the pull as well
Maybe there's still something there
As I look into your eyes
I can't help but hope that
There's finally a chance
For me to be your moon
And for you to be mine
How did you feel when you read this?
Comments
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It is really great. Another one for your collection of poems to be read over and over. The metaphors and emotions ring true and strong throughout the poem.
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Lovely
Ahh the imagery. You crafted it well! The moon and how it changes the tide is a splendid metaphor. It represents how my own feelings ebb as well. It's a great representation of human emotion - in particular love. You're such a soppy romantic!
But I LOVE IT!! 
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